disconnected and confusing as hell, as is all your stuff. once again, impossible to read.

Check out the new 'writing challenge'

Any particular reason New Orleans came into this story? *wink, wink* Nice job!

You have the best plots. This, like all others, was very well written. I very much respect your writing.
Maybe we'll do some plot swapping one day, haha, I say this only because I'm very much short on plots right now.
Whatever, another story knocked out the park.
Well done as always.

this is a great story. i like your voice, its kind of mature and poetic. keep it up. oh, yeah, and if you can can you read my story *the highway shift*? id like your feedback. only 1 person's reviewed it. anyway great story and your going on my fav. authors list.
cheers.
r/r me ~~sg

Hello again-
Nice. Creepy, and eerie as well. Disturbling well done like your others.
You have a creative imagination, and this is one of you best I thought.
Scary a bit too at times, those nightmares, yikes.
Keep it up,
Whispers In Silence

Kick-**! Very nice story! I loved the way you described everything so well and it seemed to play out like a movie of some sort. You should try to get your work published into books sometime! Btw, thanks for your review on my story again.