Nice american criticism. I think this sums up my government rather well, it's short and sweet. this is on my faves.

Wow, that is a good poem, finished or not. Say alot in a few words. Good job, hope to see more like it from you.

I like the image of a white flag being waved by bloodstained hands. Very powerful, and speaks a lot about war. Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

I really like this poem, how we say war helps, but helps who.