A touching moving piece of poetry/ prayer. He will hear.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C

I like your poem. :) Even if I am not religious, I still respect your beliefs.
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Keep writing.
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Namir Swiftpaw

I cannot describe the strong faith put into this piece. Great work...God always forgives.

We all go through times where we fall astray from Him. He is always willing to wait for us to come back. I remember my last time of going astray since it was recent. Fret not, you will return to His loving grasp soon Seras Nova, just as I did. I know you will. Excellent written work as always.

y'know.. Jesus was kinda hott.

Not into religious poetry really but this one is an exception! Love the beckon me back line thats so touhcing! Well done!