This is good! I liked it! Evn though it's simple its going to go on my favourites D I especially liked:

As the light begins to fade,

I finally see the price I've paid,

I gave up my faith too fast,

To gain release from my cruel past.'

CHEERS

good good, disturbingly good

o.0 Disturbing, yet...awesome...This poem wins the Disturbing Poem Award and a cookie! *Gives author cookie* But anyway, KEEP WRITING!