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| Butterfly Radcliffe 2004-01-29 ch 1,   | Cute. One thing: when you say sure I got -, that's bad grammer and should be sure I have -. I don't know if you meant it to sound like that or what, but it's just something I noticed. Otherwise, good job! ~Faith, Hope and Love |
| Turtle, Queen of Freeks 2004-01-26 ch 1, | Yay! You finally cussed! I'm so proud. |
| KaseyLovesNoOne 2004-01-24 ch 1, | OMG I can relate alot! I love how your poems are simple and to the point! I love your writing and I'm adding you (as well as this poem) to my favorites list! |