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| Gir Garcia 2004-02-29 ch 1,   | that's good. I like it. Those r some good choices of words. |
| Sworn Destiny 2004-02-01 ch 1, | Wow. I'm really fond of this poem. I love the idea of it, because I'm sure it's a feeling that everyone has, but they can never clearly identify it, and they rarely speak of it. For instance, when I was an ignorant pre-teen, I was always obsessed with certain boys and I was sure I was "in love" with them, but in the end, I was sure it was just in my head, and it wasn't really the feelings my heart felt. So in other words, I can connect to this poem. Good work. Please write more in the future. |
| Blue Flare 2004-01-23 ch 1, | I love it! I know exactly what you're talking about. Good job! |
| peachy-666 2004-01-23 ch 1, | Very good, actually, I know exactly how you feel. I wrote a poem like this, same title and all. Good job.. |