Awesome. The detail is perfect, makes it so much more--real. I love. And I want to know the backstory...or then again...no. No, I don't. It's better this way.
I think you should edit it a bit to make the flow better, but it's really a great piece. Terrific job.
~lyv

very deep, the setting is detailed great and it draws you into the story. i like a lot.

As you sat there and read it with me, I'm still wondering why you gave a short laugh at the end of it. It's not funny. It was actually really sad. ::consoles:: I love it, though. You are really, really talented. ::hugs::

Interesting...
Kenzie

OMG! I felt my heart pounding after I read this and I fell back into my chair. I went into a bizarre daydream state where I was in the story. I felt like a ghost trying to reach out and stop this character from doing this to herself. But, a ghost has no way of interfering in somebody's life when they are ignored, and they cannot be seen if it is that person that killed them in the first place.
And so now I fade back into the darkness where I belong, alone with myself. "The curse will never be lifted" is but a final whisper in that marked room. I fall out of this dimension with a thud, and with a confused and pained look, I throw up bile and run way. No one sees me tho, no one ever sees me.

KNEW IT!
But it was great anyway. Good job!
~Gabby