Though my beliefs don't coincide with yours, I really love the feeling of peace and natural beauty you put in this poem. I also believe in heaven (I'm Muslim) and to me, this is what I think heaven would be like-nature beyond it's finest.
-Linnet

Very serene. If it were a color it'd be white...
-God bless-

Oh my...that is beyond words. Most things divine are, I suppose.
I could almost feel Nature's caress.
~Sayrah~

This is an intersting poem, I don't like it all but you did have good imagery. I think you are a fool however for writing this, Christian Heaven is much better. But I won't attack you, I'm too tired. Please don't read my own work though. This is a nice place to go to though it really seems quaint.

This is beautiful...!

Such skill. :)

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

If you really think thats where your going after death your in for a rude awakining, honey! You don't have to believe in God and I'm not going to force it on you, but when its too late and your left behind your going to wish you never even thought to even write that poem.

::smiles::

::closes eyes happily:: Ah, Home...
Into the West, love. ::smiles::

I really am highly impressed with this. Even though my own beliefs don't coincide with yours (well, not much =;) ), I found myself deeply attracted to the vision of peace and purity you portrayed here.

Great imagery. I was wondering what happened to souls between lives! :) This is so beautiful. Excellent job.
~Swinging from the chandeliers~

Sounds almost worth dying for...
Naduralin. Gods, but I don't fear Death if that's where I get to go. It seems much better than the Christian Heaven.
Lovely work, cherie.

::smiles wistfully and puts her chin on her knees:: So lovely . . .
Makes you want to go Home, doesn't it? So clean and quiet and uncomplicated.
Beautiful poem, my dear.