Cuz! I'm becoming active in storywriting again. :) I ended up checking out my friends' lit pages too, and read this story of yours for the first time. It's wonderful! I do hope you'd finish it someday. It's nice to reminisce about Pisay every now and then.

I knew it! You're a filipino. Agham is Science in tagalog and mis keykai it's from kikay right. After noticing those I checked your profile. You went to ADMU, which is interesting because my highschool is MC. Well, I like the story so far but it was a bit confusing at first. You should use more imagery, it's mostly dialogue.

*Aherm*
Yes... Molly would be Mimi... I have no idea how I made such a mistake... thanks, anyway... :P

who's molly?

hey! update!update!update!update! wala lang... i tried searching for yoour pen name, but i didn't find you. good thing your story title was unique.
any way... please update... any questions about the skul, ask me. (i'm kate, if you don't notice yet.)
ngapala, ganda na ng grandstand...hehe
have fun! God bless!

interesting. what does hc stand 4? update soon

Purty cool! Can't wait 'tll next update! Cracking story!
Forgive me, but in regard of the 'jeepney strike' you mentioned in your A/N, what exactly does a 'jeepney' look like? I'm intrigued!

Hey - I'm back! Haven't been reviewing in a while - you've done loads. Thankies!! Yeh, great stuff! I'm hooked, as usual!

Thanks for the recognition! Your story is becoming quite exciting. I did not expect you'd put that in. Miss you Kuya! ;)

I don't understand a thing in this chapter... too confusing.

ooh... flashbacks... i love those to pieces! great chapter! *applause* update soon!

dalian mo ang pagsulat nito, ganda ng kwento e... yung pinakita mo sa akin dati, yund tungkol sa mga nagpi-PDA at bading, astig! wala lang, naalala ko kasi e.
anyway, talagang nk-base ang kwento mo sa pisay... suggestion ko mag-include ka ng something about the observatory... masaya yun!
hehe, astig k pala magsulat... god bless!

Wow, this is an excellent story! I certainly look forward to reading more in the future.. keep up the great work! ^-^

Did HC stand for has a crush? And did that crush happen to be on Marie?
Marie+Charles= that's kinda okay
Marie+John= totally weird

good story, but it needs to be a bit more clearer. and also, if john is supposed to like marie, i just don't see 'nuff chemistry between the two. or maybe i wasn't reading carefully enough.
good so far though.