this stuff is all so beautiful.. i love it

pretty sweet, nice style, keep it up!!

This one's really good. Keep writing!

It's a nice poem that I can visualize well. Not my usual taste in poetry though, but good nevertheless.

I love how you put it in a setting first and then tell a story, your making me jealous and I don;t even know you, I wish I could be that happy...but happiness depends upon ourselves, right?
Pleas R&R some of my works too. i'd be very happy to see more reviews:)

This is really nice... I can just visualize it happening. The last line made me smile, and it's hard to do that!

Aww. ^_^ It's so sweet. So romantic. Makes me want to melt into a puddle.