Wow. This is so deep...it tells a story without seeming to. Amazing.
-God bless-

I cannot pick out my favourite line out of this piece, because I think I liked all of them so much. Maybe this two lines had a great impact on me:
I live in a psychotic memory
Wishing for deliverance...
This is one great piece, very powerful, a little creepy and sardonic as well. Great work on writing this one, love your excellent word choice.

Wow. That has a lot of hidden meanings, I'm sure. I'm just not smart enough to follow it all, I'll admit it. Haha. But it was really amazing. It really gives you insights on the inner demons. Incredible. Keep up the great work. I'm gonna take this to my English teacher, he'll love it. ;)

hmm, epic indeed, and as thought provoking again...but this time i was prepared, i put on the *exact* right music and just let it flow.
god, there were so many things about this poem which made it, so many techniques, so many repitions, no many emphasis'...you used everything to your advantage, the format, the language techniques, the timing...everything, to pull together this story, which ytou successfully made into poetry itself.
i found the "hell, we all wanted it this way" to be intriguing, because even at the times of darkness of the poem it was repeated.
also "give myself back" was very chilling, very effective.
you obviously are obviously the one who has kidnapped all the poetic inspiration - i certainly have none, hopefully this wonderful peom helped.
beautiful work, kudos!