nice...i liked the rhyming pattern...if ud like to, review some of my poetry...
keep writing!

I can relate. Great job and well done!
*lime-girl*
PS. I've written some suicidal stuff. Check out my poem 'Little Voices' and my one-shot 'Sanctuary'

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Golly...this is almost exactly like the poem I wrote about a month or so ago..when I was cutting..

nicely written. sad concept. I'm sure cutters could relate and it seems that u've got the process of it written poeticly.

i like this one! gives a very good description of how this works. Poeple who cut can relate im sure. I love this one!

Oh, wow. I'm stunned. That was a really strong poem. (is too stunned to say anything else)

I feel like that alot... I have a few poems on cutting. Check them out if you would like.
Good poem.

Extremely good poem. I have a friend who's cutting herself but she told me that she's getting help. I've actually, myself, come to the point of cutting myself but was to chicken to do it. Great poem!

interesting poem though it has a element of sorrow but still good. nice poem, good job.