This is amazingly intriguing. It seems to me that this isn't going to be at all like every other vampire story on the site; you're original! Hooray! If the rest of this story is written as well as this intro, it will be one of the best on this site.

I've tried to click to the next chapter a few times, but my computer isn't letting me go for some reason, so I'll read the rest tomorrow. Adieu.

Great chapter, some parts freaked me out. Keep up the good work.

A very nice read. Awesome imagery came from this piece, I'm impressed. The dream sequence with Kalek is great. Keep the good work up.

Haha,

I know the guy so I get to see all of these great chapters ahead of time.

*nyah*

I'm also probably one of the only people to see his sketches of the characters, which are excellent.

You need to upload them for everyone else, pal.

Great story you have festering here...

Still reading the story, but I love your descriptions, very vivid

Well, I tried to leave a review after chapter 4, but it kept giving me an error message, so I'll post it to 3.
Wow, quite a world you've dreamed up here! I confess that this is not my usual type of story, so I'm probably not the best "reader" for your work, but I have to say you've got a vision of this world. It's wonderful dark and deep, isn't it? I love your character names! Imaginative without sounding made up, does that make sense? They "fit" as do the place names, etc.
My only suggestion would be to watch the language--sometimes it got in the way of the story and I got confused. Your descriptions are beautiful and I think it's appropriate in places like the fight in the bedroom in the planes, but other times it distracted me from the story and I had to go back and re-read. You're giving out a lot of information and introducing a lot of characters, so you want to be really clear who belongs to what, etc.

Xen! Of course I remember you. =D Thanks for the review; it means a lot to see some positive words from friends. ^_^
This story is great. Your style of writing creates a rich, dark atmosphere, which is perfect for the complex plot you've set up. I'd really like to see where this is headed.
Keep writing, foo'! =D

Very interesting so far, especially the part in the beginning about the fallen angel. I also regard as a plus the fact that the story isn't attempting to be overly "religious", if you know what I mean.

This is a preaty good story so far. I want to know what happens latter on. Keep up the good work.

Hey thanks! I'm working on two chapters currently. I hope to finish them soon!
Cheers.

So good, so good. More Chapters Please...