i remember that the first time that you had me read this one, i didn't really understand it. so, i took some advice from mrs. rice, and read it again. i understand it know and love it. great job jackie

it's so sad and touching.. both at the same time. it's good... it's good. oh, it's good! lol
-love, enat

Very neat way to describe a common concept... I liked it. You're very good with words.
~Lidless Eye

Beautiful. But if all we did was fly away from our problems, then where would we be? anyway, great poem.

This is sad and beautiful poem. I don't usually like poems that don't rhyme but this one is great.

i know how that is. the last stanza was what really got me. you ask for love, and then you get it and you just don't want it anymore, but you can't stop feeling in love... yeah i definatly know how that feels *tear*

*much clapping is heard from the audience*

My favorite aspect is the transition from third person to first person. Very beautifully done.

Aww, I really like this. We all feel like that at times, don't we?

aw. i like this one a lot. i wish i could fly...

I like your poem lots.. basically what I'm feeling right now... you just wish you could get away from it all but find that you're still stucked around... great poem..:)

very sweet. nice job!

i really like this. it flows really nicly and i really can relate. it is really good

Wow... I know just how you feel...
Singing would be my way to express it though...
I love your writing, keep it up!
☼Rogue Chaos☼