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| Rupert Greenwich 2005-11-17 ch 2, | I'm trying to remember which part I wrote. I can't. |
| H. T. Llewellyn 2004-08-20 ch 2, | I think you're obsessed with marshmallows. but I didn't say that's a bad thing. this is a very funny story. ^^ |
| Adamare 2004-04-11 ch 2, | Sugary wonder! That line alone makes this story good! But, the contrived sequence of events and illgoical movements through the space/time continuum don't hurt none neither. Signed, Adamare, Arkansas' most literate hobo. |
| hansolo3591 2004-04-09 ch 2, | great! |
| Kevin Noonan 2004-04-07 ch 1, | JOE! What the hell! I've known you for my entire life and i thought you kept promises!I remember you guys writing that, and you said"I'll write more later."But what the hell? where is it? The story's actually really good though. |
| R. Watson 2004-01-25 ch 1, | Wow, I think I got lost halfway through the story. I'm scared to see what chapter two will be like. Actually, it's a good story so far. |
| Atephobic 2004-01-25 ch 1, | Heh. Amusing. Maybe the summary of something should be an indicator. And yes I am proud of myself. |
| Rupert Greenwich 2004-01-25 ch 1, | Wow, this is strange, and interesting. A great writing piece, I'm looking foreward to more |
| chokingonmyownlife 2004-01-24 ch 1, | Very interesting story. The plot seems to go a little fast but it's a cool story. Kepp going! And thanks for the review! ;) ~Choking on my own life |