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| Alteng 2004-02-10 ch 1,   | This is a cute story in a twisted sort of way. I can't help to like Jack. he's a jerk, but I still like him! :) |
| Arutha 2004-02-01 ch 1, | Whoa sweet. Man, that guy's a total loser, haha. I hope you develop his character into a bit more of a caring person than that. Awesome story. So far I have one fiction story. It's called "Let it Reign"... (fantasy, you probably wouldn't be interested; but if par chance you are...) feel free. It's pretty long though. Keep up the good writage. |
| TheSilentO 2004-01-27 ch 1, | Very descriptive, every word seemed to fit perfectly. |
| Lily Pierce 2004-01-25 ch 1, | *laughs* I like it! Jack makes me laugh. I hope you'll post chapter 2 soon! |