Wow that was great. It sounds like something Jim Morrison would have written. Good job and keep writing you're going on my favorites :D

hehe! I really can't imagine you at a keg party. You always struck me as more of punch/fruity beverage/cocktail drinker. ^_^ The last two lines are a nice finisher. Anyway, I tried to read Shifted but the page said that the story didn't upload correctly (wow, that almost sounded like a pun but not quite). I'm dying to read it though so if you're not too busy...