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Reviews For: My Demise

Trinity Joselyn Carter
2004-01-28
ch 1,
abusewow... awesome... wow..
Quoven
2004-01-24
ch 1,
abuseGood emotion. I think that adding good rhyme to your poetry makes it so much more powerful though. And also, don't repeat words as much. Think about it.
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