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| spiritfire 2004-09-17 ch 1,   | Nice rhyme scheme. Loved it. Could totally see the imagery! When the author can paint a picture so clear, you know its awesome. |
| J-fReAK 2004-01-28 ch 1, | Good poet strikes again! This is a really "neat" poem and I like everything about it. I'm not sure that i could say anything bad about it! Es fantastico! J-fReAK |
| Lizzybelle Kay 2004-01-25 ch 1, | wow this is a beautiful poem. i love the last line. |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1, | I like everything but the end, Im not that big of a god person, but besides that. All you're words seem to fit evenly and yeah I liked it! ::adds to favorites liest, with the last stanza:: |