I stumbled across this in my C2 Community and I decided to give it a try. This was very good and well-descriptive, I could precieve the insanity of the other character very well and the helplessness of the situation in the eyes of the victim.

This was a hauntingly beautiful story. There's another story around here that reminds me of this work called Twisted by Kurogane Black Ninja. He writes magnificent stuff.

If you wish or have the time, feel free to check out some of my works. Youmay like them.

I really like this, it is beautifully written. Your very creative, I wish you would turn it into something, anything. You have a wonderful talent and interesting mind.

I have to say, that this is beautiful, like a sonnet of death. This story flows beautifully, congratulations this is the fourth story going on my favorites page.

WOW. well, that was disturbing. (and VERY well written)
I liked it. *nods*

Very good. I guess my freind was correct in saying it was. You should definetly write more dark stuff, if you haven't already. Very cool.

OO Whoa. That's dand. Wowowowowow!! OO

WOW! thats really cool! I like it a whole lot, I hope you write other dark things, its cool. keep up the good work ^^

Whoa. o.o Spiffy. That settles my morbidity quota for the day. ^_~ Really, though, it was very deep, dark, and disturbing--I liked it. XD Very powerful, especially with the use of blood. Very nice style throughout, too; you really captured the narrator's ever-so-slightly (*cough*) psychotic viewpoint. Kudos. ^^
Well, must return to my evil essays after this happy break. ^_^ Keep up the good work with both your writing and your art! I'll bug you soon via e-mail. ^^
Luff,
Lils