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| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusei'm not sure lost is the right term for the meaning...maybe the person's not lost but merely "home"...anyways...i think it a very truthful poem...from the perspective of the person dying. |
| A-wolf-called-Skya 2004-04-13 ch 1,  | abusegood. pretty good. though i'm pretty sure i'm just imagining it, i thought the rythym sorta went off a very little bit *Shrugs* i dunno. keep it up! anyways, i got ch.8 up, and ch.9 will be up either later today or tomarrow afternoon. though most likely i'll finish it today. keep it coming! -Rachel. *Every legend leaves a mark* |
| Charna 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice...and by nice I don't mean this is strange I'm serious about the nice good thing-a-ma-bob. Whatever, I have no clue whether you understand this but oh, well. I liked it. |
| MoonDaughter17 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abusePretty good. |
| TragedyLovesMisery 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I liek the description in it...pale lips...makes me think of Hecate. Good job |