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| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's so true...i do that sometimes...make up a "life" thats better than hmwk...i really liked that one...i can relate... |
| aquamoon222 2005-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was very sweet! That's how I feel too, I mean, geesh, my life is so boring(sometimes). It really flowed and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. Thanks for your valued reviwe on my poem Once upon a time! |
| A-wolf-called-Skya 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHi! this is the best poem i've heard you do! no critique! Yes, you can steal the friends quote. just say i invented that one. though there probably is someone who already said that long ago. ch.7 was. . .one chap early. but hey! ch.8 should posted later today or early tommarrow. also, when i find out what becca's pen name...oh, its Saccura, n/m, i was wondering if you could give soe crtique to her. she's just beginning, and it's supposed to be a wolf story. i don't know if its posted yet. she doesn't know what a summary is yet, but she'll catch on. i kno XD i need to do the spell check before posting. i hate doing it, but it catches most errors. i'm reading over my story, listening to music, and tinking about ch.8 . i hope i'm doing ok with the school part so far! i'd best shut up now! ttyl! -Rachel. *Every legend leaves a mark* |
| Lover-of-Heartbreak 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked that poem...it is well written and has good rhyme. |
| Pineapple River 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abusethat was a great poem! and i really identified with it...i know i dream of fantasy and wish it were real..anyway, keep writing! |
| Crystal Sister 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! When you reviewed my story the Amulet, you said they were all anime names. Not intentionally, but I guess they are. What animes are you into? |
| amethystdawn 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. So Beautiful... (reaches out to touch, but hand gets smacked.pouts.) P.S It's well-written. And yes, it does seem like a luv poem. |
| Yojireru Kihaku 2004-02-14 ch 1, | abusewow. thats a really good poem. like i said wow. Please reveiw my stuff. |
| Charna 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it doesn't make sense to all us other people. But blah...I have no clue what to say. I mean I'm not a big fan of people saying things that they want to say to someone. Or anything like that, but...yeah...I'm going to go on and sound like a moron if I continue. |
| MoonDaughter17 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseReally good. I like the rhyming. |