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Reviews For: I Dream of A Fantasy
ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 . chapter 1
that's so true...i do that sometimes...make up a "life" thats better than hmwk...i really liked that one...i can relate...
aquamoon222 2005-02-12 . chapter 1
That was very sweet! That's how I feel too, I mean, geesh, my life is so boring(sometimes). It really flowed and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. Thanks for your valued reviwe on my poem Once upon a time!
A-wolf-called-Skya 2004-04-11 . chapter 1
Hi! this is the best poem i've heard you do! no critique!
Yes, you can steal the friends quote. just say i invented that one. though there probably is someone who already said that long ago.
ch.7 was. . .one chap early. but hey! ch.8 should posted later today or early tommarrow. also, when i find out what becca's pen name...oh, its Saccura, n/m, i was wondering if you could give soe crtique to her. she's just beginning, and it's supposed to be a wolf story. i don't know if its posted yet. she doesn't know what a summary is yet, but she'll catch on.
i kno XD i need to do the spell check before posting. i hate doing it, but it catches most errors. i'm reading over my story, listening to music, and tinking about ch.8 . i hope i'm doing ok with the school part so far!
i'd best shut up now!
ttyl!
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*
Lover-of-Heartbreak 2004-03-29 . chapter 1
I liked that poem...it is well written and has good rhyme.
Pineapple River 2004-03-21 . chapter 1
that was a great poem! and i really identified with it...i know i dream of fantasy and wish it were real..anyway, keep writing!
Crystal Sister 2004-03-17 . chapter 1
Great job! When you reviewed my story the Amulet, you said they were all anime names. Not intentionally, but I guess they are. What animes are you into?
amethystdawn 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. So Beautiful... (reaches out to touch, but hand gets smacked.pouts.)
P.S It's well-written. And yes, it does seem like a luv poem.
Yojireru Kihaku 2004-02-14 . chapter 1
wow. thats a really good poem. like i said wow. Please reveiw my stuff.
Charna 2004-01-26 . chapter 1
Yeah, it doesn't make sense to all us other people. But blah...I have no clue what to say. I mean I'm not a big fan of people saying things that they want to say to someone. Or anything like that, but...yeah...I'm going to go on and sound like a moron if I continue.
MoonDaughter17 2004-01-25 . chapter 1
Really good. I like the rhyming.
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