I love this poem. i feel that such sadness occurs everyday all to often. we grow up, giving up, becoming lost. this poem currently describes me at the moment as i struggle to rediscover my dreams before it is to late. Great work, keep it up. i hope that one will be able to dream again. hey if ya could would check out some of my work i feel that you may like it. bye.

beautiful...
if you could take the time to review one of my 3 newest poems, I would appreciate it so much!
keep up the great work.