Very emotional, very strong! once again, your work is wistful, but this one is more humourous (hey, macarena!); but it still retains a sense of seriousness and heady emotion that marks it as a sign of questioning and searching. Excellent work!

Wow. Thoughtful. It's very well done.

Wonderfully written. I'm really starting to favor your poetry. Well done, well done.

I love the last 3 stanzas, has me still thinking...just wonderfully expressed.

Hmm. Reminds me a bit of a Hugh Blumenfeld song. I like it.
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byrdgirl

Hey man-
Remember a pen name called Ice Demon? Well its me, still writing. Thought I might stop by, and review.
Believe me, its been a hectic 3 years,trying to improve.

What a beautiful way to address such a relevant subject. I adore how you talk about Adam and Eve. It's so perfect.