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| Alivion 2005-12-06 ch 1, | Of all your works, this is my favorite.I'm not very good at criticism or commentary but I can say that this particular poem really worked on my emotions and imagination and I really, really liked it. |
| Thomas Paxton 2004-03-29 ch 1, | Good language. Well written. |
| cosmo-queen 2004-01-25 ch 1, | A very eerie poem. This is well-written with lots of vivid images, but is also haunting and effectively creepy. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |