cute

Umm, mkay...

This is a hilarious poem! But you should name them, don't just use numbers, you're not Shakespeare, for god's sake.
But very funny poem.

Wow...
I'd give you more of an actual review..but I think you know that you've written a great poem.
Captured the moment, the feeling, the excitment...all in those few stanzas.
Very good poem
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