Hm... a sea of stars. Paradise in the making. To savor their cool caresses, to hark their tinkling laughs, to relish their rays of milky light... Paradise in the making.

PS: You know what else you could do? You could KISS a star.

Wow, even better than the "Fighting" one. You amaze me! o_0
-MeeLee

beautiful piece of work, marvellously written!

Wai! This is such an awesome idea...a sea of stars! Wowowowowow...originality extreme! And *such* a good rhythm...and the rhymes are wonderful...I love your style. XD I swear...even if I tried, I could never write like...*this*. *sigh* Ah, well. Then I'll just have to worship your great poetic-ness. *bows deeply*
-Arii xD
P.S. ...I can't get that out of my head now...'sea of stars'...gah..x.X...now I want to draw it...

What a dangerously sexy poem.
I love the images I get when I read this; makes me feel all fuzzy and fluffy inside.
-Cindy Moon *)

wonderful imagery! I love stars! You are very talented and creative! Keep writing!
summerdazed

Great poem. This was well-written, flowed well and had some beautiful imagery. The last stanza was my favourite. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*