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aqua-amethyst 2005-03-12 . chapter 6
i thought there was more to the snake... guess its a desert specie...finish all twelve zodiacs...please.

review my two poems...in filipino.:) :) :)
Lina Inverse 2004-02-16 . chapter 3
Whee, I'm a Tiger!
FlamingMorning 2004-02-06 . chapter 6
This is a really good idea, and the descriptions for the haikus really fit the animal. I like the Tiger best because I am one!
twilightwriter07 2004-01-31 . chapter 2
Yeah, I agree with the last line of your haiku. Great job on all of the other haiku (scrolls to chapter 1 - so that's what the haiku was for). The only problem that I see in this one is that there's an extra syllable in the second line. But otherwise, this haiku fits well with the ox. I can't wait to read more. ^_~
sunshine and rainbows 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
This is really good, do you mean the SHADOW wants to live, or somthing else? Anyway, it's really good.
teh tarik 2004-01-27 . chapter 2
*giving life with food*
Most people aren't aware of that, I guess. Which points out that we should be grateful to the ox as well. Great work.
teh tarik 2004-01-27 . chapter 1
i think this is a great idea to write a collection about the Chinese zodiac. *waves supporting banner* ^_^
Good luck!
twilightwriter07 2004-01-26 . chapter 1
Intersting take on the Zodiac. I wonder which one this represents? ^_~ Anyhow, nice job and I can't wait to read more.
Voi Voi 2004-01-26 . chapter 1
its descriptive, but the picture confusses me!
Voi Voi 2004-01-26 . chapter 1
its descriptive, but the picture confusses me!
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