Reviews for There's no Modern Romance

Reviews For: There's no Modern Romance

Switch 2006-01-24 ch 2,	O0h!! More characters, hint of plotline. Exciting. Next chapter please!! ^_^
Sporkess 2005-11-30 ch 2,	Loving this story - it's totally hilarious. The first chapter was a work of art, especially such real gems as "I'm coming. It's just that... my blanket has somehow mysteriously plastered me to the bed. **. I can't move!" It reminded me suspiciously of a conversation with my friends this morning, in fact... I really want to see more of this story, and the very clever way you have of writing. Update soon, I beg.
Virginia Giselle 2005-08-29 ch 2,	Hardyhar. Mark's Mark-y Mark-ness is captivating. You're a cool writer. (:
rodeoclown 2005-08-17 ch 2,	I like this. Great narrative voice. And I really like Mark too. I wonder why he's always late? It doesn't seem to mesh with his personality...can't wait for more.
pneumothorax 2005-08-17 ch 2,	I like the style. Curious :p Did you say this was set in england? Some of the language seems moreso than I'd first noticed. '“Hello. Erm. Wonderfully boring class, this.” I stutter inanely.' I really liked this line. Have you changed parts of the first chapter? It seems different.
Ency 2005-08-17 ch 1,	Hehe, technically, i'm supposed to be staying away from slash, so I'll just stick with a review and come back later. But! As it is, my mistress isn't around here, and if you know who Ency is, you'll know that this is rather...odd...and I'm grasping every single chance of freedom that I have. So! It's cute! never expected me to say that, but hey! it's true! I'm very curious as to where it goes. I used to be a bloody HUGE slash writer, mostly for HP though. I still love HD...rules...ok, so MY mind, since Mistress is cruel, but yes. Don't mind the insane review. I like the story! I'll come back and review the next chap too. Cya!
Mock My Wonderland 2005-08-02 ch 1,	I really like it and added this story to my favorites. Please write more, it's a shame to leave it with only a single chapter! P.S. Dylan sounds cute
Switch 2005-06-13 ch 1,	Hi, I wanted to thank you for all of the reviews, you I figured I'd return the favor. Please update this? I like the characters a lot and you've got a great writing style. Please...?
marian 2004-12-06 ch 1,	I love this story. When are you going to update it?
pneumothorax 2004-06-04 ch 1,	Geez, just read that disturbingly fast - you really uhm, whatis? had a fast ace going at the start there. I thought it was really good although he reminds me of my science teacher shudder cliche now. Humph. Good, continue?
Airenko 2004-01-27 ch 1,	Really good. I like the way you write. It's funny. Keep on writing. I'm really looking foreward to the next chapter.
FamousOneLiners 2004-01-26 ch 1,	I reaLLY LIKE THIS story it's well written and I like his sarcastic wit and the yeah yeah yeah's are great
unused account 2004-01-26 ch 1,	M... I'm interested. Very interested. I've got to say, I love the way you write. First person just demands colloquial language, and I can't stand authors who try to have a teenager narrator talking as though they've got something lodged somewhere painful... anyway. Feedback? I love this, and at such an early stage, that's a good sign for me. Dylan's a cool main character! You've got a really unique way of writing, something I haven't seen in a long while. You haven't read Louise Rennison's books by any chance, have you? Some of the language has a flavour of it, but very unique and interesting to read at the same time. Mark also sounds like a nice guy. Meow. So, tips (because I haven't got a word of criticism at this stage). Avoid your usual romance pit-traps. Clichés can actually be really good to read, if you give them your own unique twist, which I think you'll be able to do. I'm really looking forward to where this is going. Can't wait for your next chapter! Update soon!
Trinity Joselyn Carter 2004-01-26 ch 1,	that was humourus and good.. and i can't speel! kep writing! erf!

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