*claps* Good! good! I really like the images I get from these lyrics, it is very strong. I would love to hear it to a tune, though I can imagine my own ; Thank you for the comments on my poems, btw.

I love it. It has a beautiful sort of quality to it. I also love rain poems. I think rain is just a powerful thing of nature.

Wow- I'm surprised there isn't more reviews. Very pretty. Such a romantic piece *sigh*... I really like the flow of it all and the rhythm.

*rains* ;-* Great work, keep writing.
Blessings to you. :-)

woah. great job! this is a song where there could be two meanings. like a person could be the rain and offer those feelings, or just the rain itself. good job and keep writing!

Wow. This is awesome. I can't believe no one has review yet. I really love the title and the chorus-its just really pretty and magical, I like it a lot. The only part I would change is the flame in the dark..because I've heard that used so often. But its really good-wonderful job