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| cobwebbed eyes. 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI expected something different, but I believe I like this much better.Thumbs up. |
| Max Radio 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHey, I was just punching in random numbers on this, and this story came up. Good stuff, actually, a great short story. I liked the way you wrote it the most, how you made third-person seem to work. The instrument thing was something original, and it's easy for me to read. Can't type anymore. Too tired. |
| HappyNoodleGurl 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was *so* sad! *cries* Man, you are such a good writer. On a serious note, I believe if you used this short 1 page story as a guidline and keep writing and adding on to it, this would be a very good book. *nods* I would love to one day be in the stores all glum-like then find "Death of the Mockingbird" by J.S.Danskin on the shelves and get all happy! ^_^ Well anywhoo I'm gunna go. Oh! Yeah I do have an account here. All I have so far is a crappy anime story, but I might go and write a romance that's been stuck in my head for the longest time. Anywhoo, bai! *flies off* ~*~Yo mexican friend Toni aka Bonez~*~ |