...That was a short chapter! Way way way too short! And it was the last one...well the last one in the sense of there are no more to read at the moment and I'm gonna' cry! *cries*!! See told ya'. Awesome story so far! I am in love with Ri and Gaby...so you better update soon! Very very very very very soon! Omg, I just realised it's only 11pm. I am so lame! I can't believe how tired I am. Hope all my reviews made sense! YAY! Cher is playing atm!...Ok, I know I'm lame! Right, UPDATE! LOVE THE STORY! YAY!

Party party party party! Wish i was at a party...Ri's parents are bastards...10.30?? That far too early for Ri to leave Gaby! Lol. Love it! Only one more chap. to read atm...so depressed!!

I think I'm making assumptions about...but I'm tired, hungry and thirsty atm so...too bad! I shall assume away! Aw, there are only 2 more chapters to read...I'm sad...YAY still loving the story! Those two are just so sweet! *pinches Gaby and Ri's cheeks*

Whoa- finding out info. left right and centre...I assumed Brit and Baby were bf/gf...heh, whaddya know. Aw, Ri's all protective! He's so cute! YAY more chapters to read! This story ROCKS!

Lol! Brit's a boy! Whaddya know...I just assumed girl...YAY more cuteness!...Brit's '**' Gaby b4? Right- off to read more! YAY! LOVING THIS!

YAY! OMG I was so worried that that was going to be a dream! YAY! I screamed during this chapter 'coz I accidently shut the window! It was not good...oh o...someone's going to come home aren't they? Hope not...YAY!

YAY! I want a KISS! *chants* KISS KISS KISS KISS! Some interesting images of Riel in that chapter... ;o)

Lol. That chapter was funny! I am loving the Gabriel's. They're cute...I just wanna hug 'em...it's really rather sad, but every 'partner' I read in that story was read by my brain as 'pardner'- with a cowboy accent! OMG I need sleep! Ah well. MORE CHAPTERS! YAY! MORE GABY AND RIEL! YAY!

At the moment I'm just assuming Brit's his best friend...hopefully I'm right...don't know who else it could be! YAY MORE CHAPTERS! *throws confetti and does the 'hokey-pokey'*

HAHAHA Science! I don't do science! HAHAHA Rock layers! Rock layers suck! Ok, onwards to the next chapter Batman! NANANANANANANANA BATMAT!!...Lmao- that was a typo- but I was amused by it so I shall leave it!...Still loving the story btw.

Erg! My cat just caught a mouse! Ok, review time! Awesome chapter 2! Who's Brit? And I just realised that I'm about to read more chapters and find out...moving on!

YAY! Story! I like stories...whoa- I am so overly tired right now! And I'm going to review the story all the way through...as long as it's good...but it looks good so far! And if you don't want me to review every chapter, then you better run over hear and hit me with a deranged monkey like stick! Ok, off to continue reading!...btw, if you didn't understand that. I like the first chapter! They seem cute!

This is good, hope you update soon.

I know you said that you were gonna end it here but I thought I'd review, just in case you decided to finish it and needed a lil pushing. :-P I really like the characters, their background and emotions are filling in nicely. I like how Ri is already feeling jealous. I would be nice to see Gaby’s POV but even just Ri’s is good. So if you do decided to update, you’ll def have readers!

nice story... too bad bout the gaby povs... but thats ok, the storys still enjoyable... update, k?