The 3rd and the 4th sections are magnificent.

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I don't know what to say. That is so beautiful.

Wow... this is really good... I can't find the right words to explain how this affected me... But it was definitely an interesting comparison with Ariel and Ursula and the whole image that goes along with it.

Wow, very creative and beautiful imagery, especially in the lines "Starlight dreams of you flutter in my mind, whispers of a love beyondthe depths of the universe" I really liked the last lines too. Very interesting.

Also, I want to thank you for your reviews. I really appreciated ^_^ And I'm glad that you learned a new word or two. Yeah, fayth isn't a word, just a play on the word "faith"

Wow...I'm surprised you haven't gotten tons of reviews on this...It is so beautiful. Excellent job!