A beautiful evocation of beauty and hope rising from the drab, dreary grind; how many of us plough the same weary furrow without looking beyond the rainbow?

"So used to sloth and apathy of customary art," These are stand out lines in itself in this poem. A very philosophical piece.

another brilliant how in the bloody hell are you so good at this you totaly have a gift here dude

Ehh- Getting those review alerts heh.
Did it again my friend. Your work is just excellent, and I believe that is very cool.
Whispers In Silence

i really liked the last verse! everything becoming dust...anyway great poem! _

-major smiles- I like your style of writing and the way you use your vocabulary, it's inpeccable. This was a very good piece I must say. Thanks very much for your review, that made my whole night. ) Keep writing.
Jenna xx

i thought this was really good. i liked how you brought the imagery from one line to another so smoothly. there's a word for it but i can't remember. thanks for your praise. you should read some camus if you haven't, i think you'd really like him.

very true, at least to me Very nice, keep up the good work!
Never the same

this is a good poem even though it is sort of short. i like the imagery and the way it was written. Kudos. please r/r me sometime, i don't get any revies unless i review people.
_angel

nice poem. i like the way the words roll off of my tongue when read aloud. the only suggestion i have, is that i don't like how that one line begins with "Oh..." It kind of disrupts the rhythm, i think. check out some of my stuff if you get a chance and keep writing!