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Samekian 2004-02-24 . chapter 1
HaHa, nice...a haiku about chopsticks..awesome.
Lina Inverse 2004-02-20 . chapter 5
WHOA! I was thinking this was about something like baby turtles eaten by eagles or something (do eagles even eat turtles)... Then I read the title... It fits very well, actually... Great description.
Mikuni Riddle 2004-02-18 . chapter 1
nice Haiku...
Ultimate Schuyler Offline 2004-02-06 . chapter 1
^_^ Ah! Now I get it! Thanks!! It's a nice haiku!! ^_^ Even if it doesn't make sense without the note... ^_^ Cool! It was funny though, I actually laughed the first time I read it, because I was like:
O_O *jaw drop* This had nothing to do with chopsticks! SHAM! ^_^ Meehee, um... hey!! Chopsticks can't be tired! ...Can they? O_O
Lol. *laughs* Good times, good times. Anyway, yeah. Thanks for reviewin'!! ^_^
kei-em 2004-01-31 . chapter 3
tempura...yum.
Anyway, the haikus are nice! Keep it up!
Kenishiro 2004-01-31 . chapter 1
hahaha, nice poem, though i don't know how to use chopsticks...
Voi Voi 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
Im slightly confussed, what do chopsticks have to do with this, I like how it weaves in and out, but I don't fully understand.
HanakinStarbuck 2004-01-28 . chapter 3
really great description of shrimp! It sounds so awesome.
Hanakin
Isay 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
Peaceful haiku... but where is the fried fish in it? @_@ hehe...
Isay 2004-01-28 . chapter 2
Ang astig! I have never looked at sushi that way before... -_-;
Ultimate Schuyler 2004-01-27 . chapter 1
O_O ...And this has to do with chopsticks... what? Sorry. I guess I'm not in a thinking moodt today. This is the second haiku I haven't understood. :\ G. But it was a really descriptive haiku. I liked it, just didn't see what it had to do with tired chopsticks. o.O Anyway, could you please maybe review my haikus? I'd be forever grateful. Thank you!
HanakinStarbuck 2004-01-27 . chapter 1
cute.
Hanakin
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