 Matthew Coats 2006-09-26 . chapter 13 Excellent story sara. :) |
 Neris 2005-06-08 . chapter 13And it ends! I feel bad for Ti... |
 Celeste Se'oir 2005-06-06 . chapter 13Aww, man, I hate you you know that sars? *sniffle* That was such a cute ending, at least we were finally told Briley's real name. Though why did you have to do that to Ti? Oh well, at least you finished it, and a lovely end it was.
Later~Ffuffy~ |
 mattcoats 2005-06-06 . chapter 13That was a really touching ending. It shows how you feel about god and lucifer. And if that's any indication of the sacrifice you'll give for your friends than they are very lucky and i'm honored to be distinguished as one of them. |
 mattcoats 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Good story sara but a little week as far as the yaoi goes. Not as good as the others. Still it was a good, especially for your first. |
 Walter Dash 2005-04-16 . chapter 12Continue won't you? |
 GZ 2004-11-30 . chapter 11 u made guy die. evil wench. oh well...Don't kill Bri. i like Bri. I liked Guy too...oh well...keep it comin. |
 WindStarsAndWave 2004-11-27 . chapter 12._.; I am so confused... oO Is there only one more chapter left..?? T_T; omg how special~ D: I have never finished anything befory so.. :) Hooray for you~ ._.; I still think you should let me beta~ .:poke poke:. Xx; Beecausee~ ~-~; omg I'm so confused and um... ._.; Well, finish soon, you..! .:poke poke poke:. |
 Ali 2004-11-23 . chapter 12 Wow. Nicely done. I'm impressed. Yours definitely fit better than my fight scene, but then again, that is me for you and I write graphic fight scenes. I can't wait for the ending! Yay! |
 Celeste Se'oir 2004-11-22 . chapter 12How would one know that they died? I suppose if they were revived they could.
Great discript Sar. Very well done, I shall not yell when applause is deserved. I like the depressing endings better anyways. They get more reaction. More emotion. They're better in my oppinion. Well, finish it up soon. I'm anxious to see how it ends.
Later,~Ffuffy~ |
 Esquirella 2004-11-22 . chapter 12How is it not over? You've killed them both off! This has to do with Lucifer, doesn't it? *Tapping toe* I NEED MORE! |
 WindStarsAndWave 2004-11-10 . chapter 11X.o omg~ xX; Well, that sucks majorly... D: Ah canne not believe it~ T_T; Um, it was really confusing and really sad and um... @.@ omg I can't believe only 2 more chapters..!! > |
 willowfairy 2004-11-09 . chapter 11You killed him. *sniff* I liked him... and from me to you, typos aplenty, let me beta... I'm good at that sort of thing. Um... brain is def off tonight, sorry, I cant come up with anything witty... *sigh*
*glomp!*
~K~ |
 Esquirella 2004-11-09 . chapter 11I'm VERY upset that you killed him. *tapping foot* But I wanna know what happens, so go forth and write more! |
 Celeste Se'oir 2004-11-09 . chapter 11You realize they are going to kill you right? Meh, could have been a bit better, not much detail or emtion. But it was ok.
Later,
~Ffuffy~ |