AWSOME MAN! keep it up!

good job LUNA! i love it!

Ok i was bored 2day so i decide to roam around and check out all ur stroies...Ok right now it like 2:30 in the morning to i better go to sleep...*yawn* God my butts numb! ive been sitting on this chair for hours!

Hey Luna! I loved you're poem especially the "I am a live chicken that has not been fried"-lol- we both kinda came up with that one- I am also for no apparrent reason going to list all of the ones I helped you with. (I'm evil aren't I)
-I do succeed, but never try
-I am a main dish on the side
-I have all but still need
-I am the moon and the sun
-I have ended, but bot yet begun
-I do not belong, but I do have a place.
You should also put that one you made as a joke somewhere:
-I have no nose, but I can smell that vile scent from where you dwell. lol so fun!
See ya later!
Your friend,
*~Toni~*

*skips in from Chapter 3 and looks around, smiling*
Well, I don't think it's getting to long. Though I really like this and hope you continue. If you would be so kind, I'd love some reviews from you.
Anyway. .. I do think this is my favorite I Am. ..long poem I've read yet so I'm adding it to my favorites. Anyway keep writing,
till-iburnout

Another great part. . .I really am jealous of your talent. I wish I could write a contradicting poem like this. You do really well .. .Now lets see what are my favorite lines of this poem *hums thoughtfully*
"I will yell, but you might not hear,
I can cry and not shed a tear,"
"I have done wrong, but not a sin,"
"I can count to five, but not to four,"
"I am a treasure not worth a cent,
I am a straight line, that has been
bent,. ."
Okay so I have alot of favorite lines.
Now I must go and read the next part. *skips off to Chapter 4*

*standing ovation* Wow, you are good at this.
I am an hourglass without sand,
I breathe on water; swim on land,
Just two of the many lines I like. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I like this poem you have, if you write more I'll be sure to review. At this moment I have not an idea in my head to give to you.

Wow, very awesome. I love all the contradictions, I'll bet it was really fun to write too. The idea of a continuing poem is really awesome, especially if you write this much every time. Great!