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| M L 2005-02-21 ch 1,   | I've never understood the point of haikus. I guess I like them, but I don't go out and say 'hey, I feel like some haikus today' Anyways. I don't write them or read them, but I like the way you crushed so much into.. a haiku. good job. |
| Crimson Riley 2004-06-01 ch 1, | Love this! |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-03-25 ch 1, | Hello- Well dang, you got a knack for good haikus. |
| atreju 2004-02-19 ch 1, | really good for a first haiku. haikus are hard, you have to get meaning and depth into 3 short lines and certain syllables. this was great, it really captured a great depth! |
| Morde Tempest 2004-02-09 ch 1, | For your first I am impressed! Keep writing them! |
| WhiteRequiem 2004-01-30 ch 1, | I like this one. It has quite the powerful image, and the added ryhme I believe makes this all the more impacting. "Heart and mind collide" is an excellent line. -Grant19- |
| Dewi 2004-01-28 ch 1, | Masterful. Love it. |
| WannaBePoet 2004-01-28 ch 1, | I like this, short, sweet, and to the point -_- |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-28 ch 1, | I like it, but if few survive then there wouldn't be anybody! |
| Ultimate Schuyler 2004-01-27 ch 1, | Aw. This sound likes... a heartbreak poem?? That's cute if it is. As an authoress, I love feedback too. ^_^ Please review my haikus too!! ^_^ |