   myheartwantsyou 2006-04-20 . chapter 1lol funny |
 Salkiethia 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Geeze, I really like that poem. It's awesome to see something slightly emotional mixed with a bit of science. :P (Okay, I'm tired. My mind's not working quite right. Words are hard enough to use to describe this!) Great work. I like it. A lot. |
 IrishVampire13 2006-02-16 . chapter 1I can safely say I know the feeling; my dad was virtually nonexistent all my life. Good job. |
 JohnnyGodfather 2004-11-27 . chapter 1I give you the following score:
√-8 |
 this is my love for you 2004-11-07 . chapter 1Hey, that was really cute! Hope that your parents - well, at least your mum - appreciated that. |
 PearzAreWonderful417 2004-11-07 . chapter 1So this is how you really feel? That's probably why it's so good. I usually onlly write things I can relate to. |
 b likes to write 2004-09-22 . chapter 1Ooh, this is scathing. I think all deadbeat dads ought to read this poem. Great writing, i love the concept |
 Nadine Woodward 2004-09-19 . chapter 1Very effective style. I enjoyed it a lot. |
 Froggie0 2004-08-16 . chapter 1ha ha. very cute and funny. i liked it a lot. the only problem was that some lines had a few too many syllables, but that could be fixed easily. very very cute.
and thanks for reviewing my story.
~Froggie0~
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 Remix S.O.S 2004-05-22 . chapter 1i like it a lot
(8) lol its good |
 Jackie-Obie 2004-03-13 . chapter 1This is an EXCELLENT poem! I give it a 15/10 too :D |
 Kris 56 2004-03-05 . chapter 1Love this little poem. On that scale of one to ten? I give it a 15, wonderful work. Hi! I'm the one who wrote The Child Ambassador, I just had to get a different name because mine was 'taken' here. Check my stuff out! I like your new name too! ~_^... This poem is really awsome, you are pretty good at both original and fanfic writing! Keep up the good work! |
 WriterOfDragons 2004-02-15 . chapter 1I love this story so sad great idea i think it's funny if you don't i'm not trying to offened youjust my opinion |
 daphnegray78 2004-02-02 . chapter 1Wow. I can really relate to this )don't even get me started on my Dad...). Very well written and it has a really interesting point to it. Great job! :o) |
 Siberia82 2004-01-28 . chapter 1Very clever and amusing poem with the DNA bits. The love for your mother is nicely expressed; I'm so envious of you. I know you may feel that you're unlucky to have an absent/negligent father, but at least you have one parent who you can reach out to. Neither of my folks care about me emotionally. *sigh*
Would you consider reading "Laughing Straight to Hell"? I'd like to hear from you. |
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