Hey,
Well, nicely done. Put another chapter up as soon as possibly.
Wilshire
Ps. thanks for the review:^)

It was a great story, only, it needs more details. The characters who were speaking to each other were somewhat confusing. It was really great and a really convincing background

Hey,
That was great... At a loss for words. Can't Wait for more. Up date please.
Wilshire,
Ps. R&R some of Mine. And Please R&R a freind of mine's story, The Crabtree conspiracy