Wow. That is whole new perspective on the Icarus story. I always thought that Icarus was an idiot, but I think I like this version better.

A great story. Words alone cannot describe how much I liked it.

I'd still passionately disagree with him, but at least he states his views eloquently with your voice.
This feels as if it came from a lot of reflection.
'But I saw the way his wings worked, how they were held together by the thinning strands of a person, how the dreams no longer rushed under the pale feathers'
-I think that is the best part of the entire piece. :) :) :)

:)
I never thought about that story that way...
Yeah,
I mean,
It's so cool how you can just pull a random story out of nowhere and make it awesome.
Geez.
Ah well
Nice story all in all.
You gave meaning to it.
May your onions stay sweet,
-Eckrice