Brutally written, but it's quite good. Great work and definately keep writing.

ha!

Hmm...so cold it burns? Icey hot.
It seems harsh critique upon ones self.

Blunt.. in your face... and very cold. There are no 'skipping through the fields and smelling the flowers' with this one! This is needle sharp and most absolutely burning cold! "Good"?.. Nahh... "f*ing excellent!" is more the style for this one. "Grab a hold of things and move on..." *nods*.. mmhmm! Yes! Love it! Must see more! :-)