Interesting... love the summary and the characters. I kinda just stumbled across this one, so if you're planning on continuing, POST IT HERE!

great story cant wait to read more my favorite ling is
"I just froze time right now, took a nap and woke up. I’m basically a walking VCR.”
lol thats great

Sweet. This sounds pretty freakin' interesting. I want the next chapter, although I will wait cause I love you. -smiles- the comment about the sword was hilarious, I laughed. Which is odd. Hmm. Yes, well, anyway, good job.
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