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| Aetha Daemon 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a wonderful poem that shows just how much you appreciate and love your God, and your respect for His powers. Tough I don't believe in God as human seeming but an omnipotent power that infuses the very rock beneath our feet, I can clearly see where you are coming from. |
| Sapphire Spectrum 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abusethat was very well written - good job! It said on your bio that you've been flamed for being a Christian, seriously? that's really bad. Anyway,good job! ~Illuminated in darkness~ |
| Beautifula 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseTHat was really good and I liked how you described it as "Heaven's hurricane to reawaken my spirit". |
| JC-Saved-Me 2004-11-12 ch 1, | abuseHey, I thought that was beautiful. I love it! God is My healer, my saviour, my redeemer, my deliverer, my Lord and my King, but most of all, my everything! *~Rachel~* |
| smile persephone 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's a wonderful poem. Although, I am not a Christian, I can understand it. I feel that way about the Goddess. Beautiful imagery. Kudos. |
| Selah Ex Animo 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... your handle on language and description is magnificent. And the poem; its concept, is particularly awe-inspiring. ' An epitome of majesty. God is majesty. Beautiful. ' Have a God-blessed day, ' - Selah |
| silverxwings144 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful! i am a devoted Christian too. its always awsome to meet another brother/sister in Christ. |
| Eulogy of the Scorned 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is really awesome. |
| Caitir 2004-03-30 ch 1, | abuse0.0 the images... absolutely amazing. I can see the picture, each word drawing a line, filling a color... absolutely amazing. goodness... |
| Eirien 2004-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a wonderful poem, I cannot even find words to express what I feel when I read this. I think it’s my favourite of yours so far. Your imagery is so stunning, so well-developed, so consistent, so awesome – and so true! Again, it’s your passion and intensity that speaks into my very heart. (I guess I’m considered as “extreme” as you, and like you I’m glad I am ;-). ) Another thing I really like about your poems is how you stress the fact that the initiative has to come from God, and we cannot change/ love/ etc. without his help. You are incredibly talented, and although I haven’t got much time, I’ll read your other works as soon as possible. |
| Mors Laminil 2004-03-09 ch 1, | abuseSuch lovely poetry... I really enjoy reading it. |
| Needa S 2004-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAmazing...Thumbs-up! Do keep writing my friend, you are very talented! Needa S. |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuse'Share the wealth', indeed. Very powerful this one, the words just echo in your mind long after reading them. For the umpteenth time, brilliant write. |
| Franken 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThat's amazing, you seem to keep putting out good poems and stuff. You're too talented for your own good. Share the wealth! j/k. ~~Franken~~ |
| content with rhyme 2004-02-04 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Very well written. The content was just beautiful. Great work! :o) |