WOW! That was REALLY good! I really liked it! It flowed really well, and it was really cool!

at first i thought this was about introspection, but then I figured about that the speaker was talking to her lover/friend, so it was like it kind of had a double meaning. so that was cool. and I'll stop rambling now.

friends and lovers, a thin line. many have crossed it and it hasn't worked out, i've seen it happen before. nice poem, you did a good job.