Wow, thats nice you have alot of emotion and good imagry. (spelling)

Me like!

i like the way you worded this one. it really shows the raw emotion in it. i know the feeling

endless dream, this is a nice theme you have here. nice poem, nice flow, and good job though a bit short. could stand to be a tad bit longer but it's a good poem.

Causing my make-up to smear? What kind of a line is that? Im sorry but this is one of the worst poems I have read.
Go and get a life