Oh! This is SO gorgeous! I'm amazed and speechless...this brought such vivid pictures to my mind that it's bloody scary...so gorgeous...amazing! Stunning! Magnificent...I won't even try to describe anything but know that I LOVE this. Love, Mia

wow...that's all I can think of to say...it's just amazing!

Once again, simple words create such splendid imagery that speaks to every sense. thank you.
~Nat

interesting.. cool imagery... you might want to explain some words like Krishana and Sari

That is absolutely beautiful. So evocative, so vivid. Your language is just exquisite. And it tell a story, which is not done in poetry as often as I think it should be. It's also rare to see a Hindu poem around here, and I think it's great. Huzzah for diversity. Cheers!

So beautiful and breathtaking. Man, I wish I could write like you!