I love the world you've created here... At the start, it seemed alittle primitive, but you were so good a creating the mood of the peice that I didn't even realize that it was a play... And then it went forwards almost 3 millenia, into another world, one by which I was absolutly entranced. I LOVE IT! Please keep going, because this is such a good story it deserves to be finished.
:K
Bloodfeeder

Write more now, pretty please? ;-;

That was damned awesome. Ana said you were a good writer, guess she was wrong. Cause you're ** awesome.
(Dali, Ko-Chan thinks you're seski.)
But, you'd better update soon. Or... I have friends that are waiting for you outside your house. ^^ Ja.

@.@ You're taking forever to update again... soo not fair. This is SUCH a good beginning...

C'est fantastique!

I like this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens to Yaoi.

This story seems interesting. Update soon. Thanks.

HI
know what, I love your story. The curtain part was great, you had me fooled. oh and before I forget...UPDATE
^^
toodles

Seems interesting, hope you post another chapter soon.

Excellent! Very well-written. I like the sci-fi thing. And the play at the beginning was awesome. I hope you update soon.

Ackk!! That was a short chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter