Chagan thought it was haunting. I agree. Wings? Anyway, it's always as interesting to have stuff revealed in the final part of a story. Interesting.

Wow. That Is Great!

wow... i can't find the words to describe this piece. it seems just really sad and really depressing... somewhat written of an emotional instablity. i've been at that point... i think we all have at one time or another in our life (not the literal death part, but the fact that you miss someone)
uhm well written. how should i say this... get undepressed? :D

Wow...That was haunting :O
Lol, whoever says u need to be more verbose needs a swift kick in the butt, ur normal style is just fine, and it works great on this one! Loved the whole thing, its really tragic, and just amazin :D

This is really moving. It sent chills down my spine as I kept reading on and on. It had a really poetic quality to it, and i think this would be really good in the poetry section... i dunno if this is a one shot deal or the beginning of something else... but this is really special. great stuff here.
M.C.