beautiful piece of writing. yay! i didn't sign in because, well, i was too lazy to sign in. so there. and write, write, write more! *cheers*

this is very interesting, and the end is very good, keep it up. see ya later

Wonderful piece you've got there.
The subtle rhyming scheme was lovely.
Very interesting too.
Especially the ending - you've gotta love that one.
Great job here.
I enjoyed the brevity of it.

~Shadafakup

I like it, it's beautiful. Mel